Shasam  +  146334 Mon, 10 Oct 05 03:47 AM I had been in London for about four days,I saw  the Tower of London ,the Tower Bridge the Big Ben and the other famous places                                                       (visited) (have) of this city.To arrive in Bath, I brought a coach.The journey was long but I'm very happy to arrive in this town.I didn't stay here                ( Word order) I took a coach to Bath. before ,but all my friends who saw Bath tell me that it is very beautiful.I hope I enjoy myself very much. As for the other corrections I didn't know............... Shasam Joined on Sat, Sep 10 2005 New Member 11 Word Order

	Clive  +  146361 Mon, 10 Oct 05 07:01 AM Hi, I suggest: I was in London for about four days and I saw  the Tower of London, Tower Bridge, Big Ben and other famous places.To get to Bath, I took a coach.It was a long journey and I was very happy to arrive here. I hadn't stayed here before ,but all my friends who had seen Bath told me that it is very beautiful.I hope I enjoy myself very much. Best wishes, Clive Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 31,463 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo