Please correct the unpaid leave letter

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Dear All,

Please help to correct the below letter.

Thanks,

Calvin

To: Henry CM Chan, General Manager

From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager

Date: 7 March 2007

Subject: Request for Unpaid Leave

I wish to apply for unpaid leave effective from April 1, 2007 to April 10, 2007 inclusive.

My sister will get married and she wants me to go to the wedding. Hence I will like you to approve my request.

I will finish my project before I go. My routine task should be delegated to my assistant, John. If there is any urgent matter, they can reach me either by long distance call or E-mail.

Jonah Wong
New Member06
Hi Calvin,

Seems pretty good. I've offered a few changes.

Best wishes, Clive

To: Henry C. M. Chan, General Manager

From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager

Date: 7 March 2007

Subject: Request for Unpaid Leave

I wish to apply for unpaid leave effective from April 1, 2007 to April 10, 2007 inclusive.

My sister will get married and she wants me to go to the wedding. Hence I will like you to approve my request.

I will finish my project before I go. I have delegated my routine tasks to my assistant, John. If there are any urgent matters, I can be reached either by long distance or E-mail.

Thank you,

Jonah Wong

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Thanks so much, Clive.
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