Hi Calvin,
Seems pretty good. I've offered a few changes.
Best wishes, Clive
To: Henry C. M. Chan, General Manager
From: Jonah Wong, Marketing Manager
Date: 7 March 2007
Subject: Request for Unpaid Leave
I wish to apply for unpaid leave effective from April 1, 2007 to April 10, 2007 inclusive.
My sister will get married and she wants me to go to the wedding. Hence I will like you to approve my request.
I will finish my project before I go. I have delegated my routine tasks to my assistant, John. If there are any urgent matters, I can be reached either by long distance or E-mail.
Thank you,
Jonah Wong