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Anonymous  #205518  Sun, 12 Mar 06 06:01 PM

Will somebody please help me to write a simple speech for conducting a choral speaking contest. I was chosen to be the mc for the contest. Being inexperienced, I had a hard time writing  an effective speech . Thank you very much.

  
paco2004  #205598  Sun, 12 Mar 06 11:26 PM
We would like to help you. But we couldn't do anything if we knew nothing about what you want to speak. Write down here your manuscript, then we might help you by revising it.

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Anonymous  #206049  Tue, 14 Mar 06 07:33 AM

Thank you, Paco. Here is my specch. Please help to correct it.

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, the organising chairman ,children and parents. 

We would like to welcome you to  our Choral Speaking competition.Before we start the competition , let us remind the audience of the rules of the competition.I would like to introduce the judges and the timer for this competition.The contest may begin now.

let's give them a round of applause.

Now it's time to announce the winners.

  
paco2004  #206267  Wed, 15 Mar 06 03:22 AM
I think it's nice. But please wait native speakers' opinions.

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