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Chateaurouge  #450752  Fri, 07 Dec 07 06:54 PM
Hi, I really need some help, I come from a Spanish speaking country, I live in Paris and I want to address a cover letter to a headhunter agency.
If somebody is kind enough to help me out I'll appreciate it so much.

Dear Mr. ***

I am writing to you to express a great interest in collaborating with your agency because of your customized approach and your outstanding results. My goal is to be part of a design team  to share my vision and priorities: honesty and respect for each other as well as for the design process in order to produce high-quality products.

I have a 5-year experience working as a designer for women’s RTW and the “haute-couture”, and as well 2-year experience working as an artistic director for a new edgy brand of women’s accessories and home objects (name of the brand).  Now, I am finishing that last project meant to an international market, mainly to Japan and I am eager to begin a new professional venture where I can thrive as a designer.

My principal assets are guided by my creative approach as a designer connected to a sharp sense of fashion, associated to the reality of the market and the demands of the brand’s identity which I collaborate with. In addition, I am multi-task and meticulous person as well as autonomous and a team worker.

In addition, as a formal (univercity) and (university) graduated, I benefit of a multicultural experience having lived, studied and worked in NYC and later in Paris. This broad-based understanding will be an advantage for a firm with global interests.

My resume and samples of my work are enclosed for your evaluation. I will contact withintwo weeks to schedule a time in which I may further discuss my qualifications. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely


***


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Feebs11  #450756  Fri, 07 Dec 07 07:23 PM
 Chateaurouge wrote:
Hi, I really need some help, I come from a Spanish speaking country, I live in Paris and I want to address a cover letter to a headhunter agency.
If somebody is kind enough to help me out I'll appreciate it so much.

Dear Mr. ***

I am writing to you to express a great interest in collaborating with your agency because of your customized approach and your outstanding results. My goal is to be part of a design team  with which I can share my vision and priorities: honesty and respect for each other as well as for the design process in order to produce high-quality products.

I have a five years of experience working as a designer for women’s RTW and the “haute-couture”, and as well two years of experience working as an artistic director for a new edgy brand of women’s accessories and home objects (name of the brand).  Now, I am finishing that last project meant toI am about to finish the last project, aimed an international market, mainly to Japan, and I am eager to begin a new professional venture where I can thrive as a designer.

My principal assets are guided by my creative approach as a designer connected to a sharp sense of fashion, associated to awareness of the reality of the market and the demands of a brand’s identity which I collaborate with. In addition, I am a multi-tasking and meticulous person as well as being able to work on my own or as part of a team. and a team worker.
from a multicultural experience, having lived, studied and worked in NYC and later in Paris. This broad-based understanding will be an advantage for a firm with global interests.

My resume and samples of my work are enclosed for your evaluation. I will contact you within two weeks to schedule a time in which I may further discuss my qualifications. I hope you will find these of interest, and will contact you in two weeks to arrange for a meeting at which we can discuss the next step.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,


***


....Thanks again.....

  
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Chateaurouge  #450766  Fri, 07 Dec 07 08:25 PM
That is very nice of you Feebs 1,  thank you.

But there is one thing that I am not sure to get it. The second part of the following paragraph it seems to be a bit disconnected and floating around,
 
Me.....
My principal assets are guided by my creative approach as a designer connected to a sharp sense of fashion, associated to the reality of the market and the demands of the brand’s identity which I collaborate with. In addition, I am multi-task and meticulous person as well as autonomous and a team worker.

In addition, as a formal (univercity) and (university) graduated, I benefit of a multicultural experience having lived, studied and worked in NYC and later in Paris. This broad-based understanding will be an advantage for a firm with global interests.


Feebs correction...
My principal assets are guided by my creative approach as a designer connected to a sharp sense of fashion, associated to awareness of the reality of the market and the demands of a brand’s identity which I collaborate with. In addition, I am a multi-tasking and meticulous person as well as being able to work on my own or as part of a team. and a team worker.
from a multicultural experience, having lived, studied and worked in NYC and later in Paris. This broad-based understanding will be an advantage for a firm with global interests.

If there is somebody else that whants to give a hand, Please go ahead. I'll be thankfull
  
ClareW  #451340  Sun, 09 Dec 07 04:02 PM
As this is your final paragraph, you can write "Finally" (rather than "In addition").

In addition,
Finally, having lived, studied and worked in NYC and later in Paris, as a formal (univercity) and (university) graduated,  I benefit of have gained multicultural experience. This broad-based understanding will be an advantage for a firm with global interests.


Best wishes

Clare
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Anonymous  #451379  Sun, 09 Dec 07 06:34 PM
thans ClareW,
Now it makes more sense.

best regards
  
Feebs11  #451394  Sun, 09 Dec 07 08:04 PM
Sorry - the formatting cut out a line of text. Use Clare's suggestion - it works well.
  
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