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Anonymous  #502793  Sat, 19 Apr 08 11:24 PM

Hey guys.I found this site yesterday and it's absolutely amazing.It's so nice of you to help usWink with such writings, which sometimes are so important to us.So...please please please, may someone just see my motivation letter and comment it.Please, please, please!

Dear Sir/Madame,

 

I am Katerina Ignatova from the University of Veliko Turnovo and I would like to study at Your University as a part of the Erasmus programme.

I am born and raised in Bulgaria. My language education started when I was 6 years old. I attended a foreign languages oriented school and concentrated on both, Russian(for the first 7 years) and English(from 8th grade to now). I fell in love with the foreign languages. My goal became to improve my knowledge in Russian and English. But I did know that these two languages are not enough. Now I study English and French at the University of Veliko Turnovo. I really love French language. It’s a difficult language, but at the same time so soft and beautiful.

I participate in the Erasmus exchange programme because I would love to study English language, English literature and history in France. Because I am absolutely convinced that Université Catholique De L’Ouest provides its students with an excellent education. Not only do I want to study English at Your University, but also I would love to improve my French. I know that the best to improve a foreign language is to practise it in a Native sphere. And I will be able to do that through my everyday life and my courses.

I read a lot about Université Catholique De L’Ouest.It is a very prestigious university that provides excellent education and ensures the success of its students. I fell in love with “La ville Noire” as well. It’s so interesting, beautiful, ancient city .The sights of the town are just remarkable, the gardens are magnificent!

 I hope that after my graduation from the university, I will work as an interpreter or translator. I believe that one semester at Université Catholique De L’Ouest will give me a lot of experience, knowledge and confidence for my future career.

I thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

 

 

 

 

 

Sincerely:

Katerina Ignatova

I will be very thankful

  
Mister Micawber  #502870  Sun, 20 Apr 08 03:42 AM
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Dear Sir/Madame,

I am Katerina Ignatova from the University of Veliko Turnovo and I would like to study at Your University as a part of the Erasmus programme.

I am born and raised in Bulgaria. My language education started when I was 6 years old. I attended a foreign languages oriented school and concentrated on both, Russian (for the first 7 years) and English (from 8th grade to now). I fell in love with the foreign languages. My goal became to improve my knowledge in Russian and English. But I did know that these two languages are not enough.

Now I study English and French at the University of Veliko Turnovo. I really love French language. It’s a difficult language, but at the same time so soft and beautiful. I participate in the Erasmus exchange programme because I would love to study English language, English literature and history in France. Because I am absolutely convinced that Université Catholique De L’Ouest provides its students with an excellent education.

Not only do I want to study English at Your University, but also I would love to improve my French. I know that the best to improve a foreign language is to practise it in a Native sphere. And I will be able to do that through my everyday life and my courses. I read a lot about Université Catholique De L’Ouest.It is a very prestigious university that provides excellent education and ensures the success of its students. I fell in love with “La ville Noire” as well. It’s so interesting, beautiful, ancient city .The sights of the town are just remarkable, the gardens are magnificent! I hope that after my graduation from the university, I will work as an interpreter or translator.

I believe that one semester at Université Catholique De L’Ouest will give me a lot of experience, knowledge and confidence for my future career. I thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,

Katerina Ignatova
  
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Anonymous  #502922  Sun, 20 Apr 08 09:23 AM

thanks

 

  
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