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kony  #116001  Wed, 06 Jul 05 10:52 PM

I need to write something in english. I wrote it but I need help and correct it, please help me.  I wrote:

ALIDA ... identify with passport ....from ....   finished her studies and got the degree “Normalista at the Normal Nacional ”,  after, she studied education at the “Universidad de Santo Tomás”.  She got the Education degree  She started to work at the School ..... in the year ...and she had worked in the Institution until the year .., She was orientating the girls of basic primary in their integral formation, following the Salesian’s pedagogy of San Juan Bosco " educating the young women to be in the society good Christian and honest citizens ".chemas-microsoft-comSurprise [:O]fficeSurprise [:O]ffice" />>>

She distinguished in her work for her feeling of belonging to the Institution, responsibility and care the girls>>

Sincerely

 

Kony

  
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Mister Micawber  #116112  Thu, 07 Jul 05 06:28 AM
Hola Kony-- welcome to English Forums!

ALIDA ... identify with passport [I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW THIS PHRASE FITS IN, KONY] ....from ....   received her Normalista degree from the Normal Nacional and her Education degree from the Universidad de Santo Tomás.  She started working at  ....School in ...., continuing at this institution until ....,  where she was  responsible for the orientation of the basic primary girls according to the Salesian pedagogy of San Juan Bosco: 'educating young women to be good Christians and honest citizens'.

She was distinguished in her work for her feeling of belonging to the institution, her sense of responsibility and her personal attention to her pupils.

Sincerely yours,



If this is a letter of recommendation, then you should finish with a direct statement to that effect: 'I found Alida to be a skilled and  conscientious colleague, and would highly recommend her for any position suited to her qualifications.'


  
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