Chreal  +  71389 Tue, 01 Feb 05 03:47 AM This is my thesis, and I need someone to proofread, because my social teacher is the worst teacher. Isaac Newton was one foremost mathematician and physicist alive, as the utmost significant contributor to the advancement of modern science, and with many calculations, Isaac Newton’s changed how the way people understood the universe, because no one had been able to explain the universe before, instead, they would use religion to explain everything. Isaac Newton actually contribution to the French Revolution was not anything, for his physical mind had been long defunct, but his work and thought processes were inspirations to the following eras. How is this for a thesis? Is it a good thesis? How do I make it better? Thanks =) Chreal Joined on Sun, Jan 30 2005 New Member 06

	anon1  +  71394 Tue, 01 Feb 05 04:02 AM Hi Chreal, I am not sure what your thesis is, other than a focus on Isaac Newton. I think you need to break up your sentences into smaller, bite sized pieces and go from there. Isaac Newton was one foremost mathematician and physicist alive, as the utmost significant contributor to the advancement of modern science, and with many calculations, Isaac Newton’s changed how the way people understood the universe, because no one had been able to explain the universe before, instead, they would use religion to explain everything. That's quite a mouthful, no? By the way, they still can't explain the universe, so Newton didn't solve the problem. He shed some light, to be sure, but scientists are still bashing their brains out trying to better understand our universe. MountainHiker anon1 Joined on Fri, Jul 2 2004 Senior Member 2,049