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Latest post Thu, Nov 9 2006 9:58 PM by Widget. 1 replies.
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Ssmm  +  291141 Thu, 09 Nov 06 04:50 PM

Please give me comment, I am learning how to write a formal email.

Dear ***,

I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator to take up the role from ***. According to *** you are one of our valuable partner with us. I have tried to contact you to see if we can organise some courses after Nov., perhaps in Jan, however, you are on leave for this week.  I sincerely hope that we can dissucss the future plan sometime next week in person. But I will be on leave until Nov.15 Wed., would it be fixed the meeting on next Thur., 2:30pm. at your office. Please confirm if you will be fine or have another suggestion.

Thank you for your attention and I look forward to co-organise more courses with you in the future.

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Widget  +  291205 Thu, 09 Nov 06 09:58 PM

I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator.  I have taken over the role from ***.  *** informs/has informed me that you are one of our most valued partners. I tried to contact you to see if we can organise some courses after Nov. - perhaps in Jan; however, you are on leave this week.  I sincerely hope that we can discuss these future plans sometime next week in person. As I will be on leave until Nov.15 Wed., would it be possible to have a meeting next Thur., 2:30pm. at/in your office. Please confirm if this is suitable; or if you have another suggestion.

Thank you for your attention and I look forward to co-organising more courses with you in the future.
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