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I was born in (city), (country), on month day year. When I was a child, everything around me roused my curiosity. I always wondered why something happens, or why other things have a particular shape. And I asked my parents until they had no more answers.
I have a very integrated and lovely family. My parents are from (country), they have taught me not only (country) language, but also good morals and traditions. I love listening (country traditional) tales, because they are fairly interesting and contain very deep thoughts. From each story I heard, I have learned a lesson for life.
In school, I was specially interested in mathematics, physics and chemistry. Through those subjects I could find answers to my childhood questions. While other parents force their children to study, my parents made me have fun, of course, without missing my homework. But for a strange reason, the less my parents pressure me, the more responsible I became. I remember once my math teacher gave us 150 equation exercises for homework, and 150 long exercises is too much to finish in just one day, so I began solving exercises right after I arrived home. I have done 135 by midnight, but I still had 15 to finish. At that moment my father asked me: ”Do you need help?”. I answered: “Thanks, but I will finish all”. He replied “ Don’t stay up too late or you won’t get up on time for school.” I said “Don’t worry, I’ll set 3 alarms”. So, I kept working until I finished the home work.
As no human is perfect, I also have some defects. One of them is that I’m too perfectionist, I want every thing impeccable. So, I waste more time planning than doing something. But I am sure that I will transform all my weakness into strength by hardwork and perseverance. I will always look to be better than yesterday.