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Good luck, Clive
I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing.
Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
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HR Department
ABB Company
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Dear Sir, Try to get a name. Try calling their office and asking th recetionist who the HR manager is
I am writing this letter to apply for the Marketing Executive position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com.
I graduated from HK University and hold a bachelors degree from the Faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chiness Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship. I have learned how to run a real business, including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department stores.
In addition, marketing is my major interest. I have learned a great deal about marketing methodologies not only from my business experience but also from independent study. I am able to prepare and implement a marketing plan.
I believe that my experience, commercial sense and analytical skill would make me a excellent candidate.
My resume is attached. An opportunity to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can help your company would be most welcome. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you.
Yours faithfully,sincerely,
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Enclosure: Resume