Please modify this letter

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bubu prasant  #239790  Sun, 25 Jun 06 03:33 AM
Hello,

The following is a letter of request from a woman, to get the money her husband was to get before his death.

can you please rewrite this letter in official english.
[Please don't worry about th addresses and other formalities. It's just the body of the letter I am concerned about]

Dear sir,

I would like to bring to your kind notice that my husband, on account of his sudden death, never received the 6 month's salary due to him [ from march 15th to september15th]

It would be a great help if you could help me get these money, for which act of yours I shall be ever obliged.

Thank you
  
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Likeguslee  #239799  Sun, 25 Jun 06 04:25 AM

Dear Sir:

I would like to bring to your attention that my husband passed away suddenly, and he never received the six-month salary (from March 15 to September 15th) that was due to him.

I would very much appreciate your assistance in helping me obtain this money.

Thank you very much for your action on my request.

 

Sincerely yours,

 

 

  
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