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My face has many details
My face has many details. My hair to start, my hair has the brownness
of a young stag (reminisce of Bambi). It has many fluffs, though is
very straight. Straight like a ruler .It has the depth of light as
well. Now my eyes, there are a camera with the lenses in the middle and
all the other stuff on the side. My cheeks are deep, but limited. They
are thin but a structural bone changes their shape. My eyebrow is dark
like the night and is connected at the center by a row of small hairs.
My eyelashes convey a dark sense of mood, a far away mood distant but
still inventible. My nose has the sharpness of a blade and the dullness
of a toy. My lip is long but connected to my face and conveys a
mystical part and understanding of friendship. My skull is a round
indented protector of life I could not live without oh no! My ears are
silo absorbing any noise they come into to contact with transporting
the sound to my brain which in mere seconds time gives me a repy. My
chin is the fore stander, the defender it protects and does so greatly.
I feel a sense of safety because of it and a feel that makes it
intimidate the other face parts. My cheekbones are the strangest,
making a sort of V of it at the top being wider and closing the
distance every centimeter. My forehead is flat but still out parting.
My face is omniscient a fairy wandering through the ever winding road
of life it has taken much abuse and much love but I now say that I am
happy about the way my face looks like.