cjnitrous  +  498107 Tue, 08 Apr 08 03:16 PM here it is is it correct? what isn't right please help Is this sentence correct?  The man obliged kindly as he was so impacted by such a young boy who made such a courageous act. and could I get some help on commas? please thanks  REALLY NEED HELP need help asap please cjnitrous Joined on Tue, Apr 8 2008 New Member 02 Commas

	Philip  +  498115 Tue, 08 Apr 08 03:29 PM The man kindly obliged, as he was so impressed with such a young boy who had done such a courageous act. Welcome to the forums! Philip Joined on Thu, Jun 23 2005 Veteran Member 8,738 At reise er at leve! - H. C. Andersen

	Marius Hancu  +  498116 Tue, 08 Apr 08 03:30 PM Impacted is too "heavy" here  Simplify stuff, or you'll sound too pompous or pretentious or too serious. Perhaps:  The man obliged, as he was impresssed by the courage of such a young boy.  The man obliged, as he was impresssed by the courage of  the boy. Read more current fiction to learn how people speak these days. Marius Hancu Joined on Wed, Apr 26 2006 Veteran Member 11,673