My two cents:

I suggest you move some of the info. to your statement. You are also alternating between listing important items and writing about them in complete sentences (See "Interests). Try to be consistent.

Your languages should be in the "Skills" section. Just my two cents!

Lifeengineer wrote:

Name: ******************     Address: **********************.     Telephone: *****************     Email address: *****************   Date of birth: ***************** Marital status: Unmarried Nationality: *****************     Visa: Yes Relocate availability:    (Are you willing to move?)                                                                                                             Current candidate profile: After graduation I was preparing for this master, now I am waiting for the selection's result.                 OBJECTIVE I am looking for a professional master program that would give me the opportunity to gain a deeper empirical knowledge related to communication and networking field. My aim is to be part of a team of a big company specializing in the information technology and communication field, Marconi would be a good opportunity.        EDUCATION 2002 – 2006    Faculty of Economic Sciences & Management (Bachelor in Computer Sciences Applied for Management: 4 years). 1994 – 2002    IBN MANDHOUR secondary school (Baccalaureate of State : Mathematics field) 1988 – 1994    Primary school Saint Jacques(why is that important?) English: Very good. In fact I am preparing for the TOEFL exam at AMIDEAST and I am going to take it on September 1st. An email will be sent to you at ***************** with results. Italian: Buono, ho frequentato due corsi di italiano all' Istituito Italiano Di Cultura (livello iniziale e livello intermedio). French: Very good.        WORK EXPERIENCE February – May 2006                         I did my last year's project at the CNI (Centre National de l'Informatique) and I enjoyed it a lot. It was a rich experience with a very qualified team where I was involved in an interesting networking and communication project using Java, TCP/IP and SMS technologies (please look at the enclosed report for more details). Summer 2005 (June - August) A colleague and I developed an application that managed all the activities of  a GSM maintenance workshop: The IDE used was the  VB.Net and we chose  ORACLE as DBSM. July – August 2004 It was a good experience working at the CNSS (Caisse National de Sécurité Sociale which can be translated in English to: National Fund of Social Security) where I was a member of its IT team.       PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATION o       Network management / Data transmission (LAN-WAN): Advanced academic knowledge + Hard working experience (It was the topic of my last year project: a Java application developed under Linux to survey the Local Network's components using communication technologies). o       Software development / Programming (Java, C, C++, VB.Net): Academic knowledge + work experience (my last year project was developed with Java under Linux Suse). o       Advanced theoretical and empirical knowledge of operation systems: process conflict, memory management, data storing, network configuration, users and groups management … o       Web development (php, MySQL, HTML, XML, Java script, some web administration tools such as: PhpMyAdmin): academic knowledge + personal effort: development of the AIESEC University Local Community web site for the year 2003 and of my own web site. o       System analysis and design (UML and MERISE ----- Rational Rose 2005, UMBRELLO and Power AMC 10): academic knowledge + work experience (my last year project was designed using UML on UMBRELLO: the most famous open source software running under Linux). o       DBMS (Oracle 9i, 10g under both Windows and Linux, MySQL 5 also under Windows and Linux): academic knowledge + work experience (I worked on Oracle during my first internship and on MySQL 5 in my last year project). o       Financial management: academic knowledge. o       General and analytic accounting: academic knowledge. o       Corporate Economics: academic knowledge. o       Probability and Statistics: academic knowledge. o       Organization theories (very important courses about organization of the work): academic  knowledge + associative experience at AIESEC*. o       Human resources management: academic knowledge + associative experience at AIESEC*.        SKILLS o       Professional Skills: Leadership skills, Work in group. o       Management skills: Project management (Planning, sponsoring, preparing, presenting) o       Personal Skills & Knowledge: Open mind, easy going, ambitious and reliable.        ASSOCIATIVE LIFE o       Organizations: Active member of AIESEC* and Co-Vice President of Information System & Communication for the 2003/2OO4 mandate. o       www activities: Member at aiesec.net community, insatech.com, securitynets.net,  linuxforum.com and very active on MiRc especially on networking, Linux and security chat rooms ….           INTERESTS o                   Travelling: I love travelling a lot, I love discovering many other new cultures. o                   Computer Sciences: Networking, IS security, Linux, all the new technologies in general. o                   Sport: Tennis and swimming.         REFERENCES           *****************                    PhD (operating system)                      Tel: *****************           Mr **************                    Network engineer at the CNI             Tel: *****************          AIESEC, the world's largest student organization, is the international platform for young people to discover and develop their potential so as to have a positive mpact on society. In addition to providing over 5,000 leadership positions and delivering over 350 conferences , AIESEC also runs an exchange program that enables over 3,500 students and recent graduates the opportunity to live and work in another country. For further information please do not hesitate to visit these URLs: www.aiesec.org, http://*****************