Please help me to write a formal letter to English school

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Anonymous:
Hi every body,

This is my first time visiting this very useful site by "google"

I'm actually tiring to write formal letter to English school in UK. I want to ask about the courses, tuition, housing, meals and transportation.

I don't want any body write it for me I want to guide me and show me the formal layout then correct me for any mistakes.

I really want to thank you for this useful website.
Hello,

Write your letter then and we will help you.
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Anonymous:
Dear Sir\Madam.

i am very excited to write a letter to you. My name is Emmy Johnson, i am 18 years old Norwegian girl . I live with my parents and

I am my last year in Secondary School .Your school is one of my favorate schools that i am very interetsed in to start.

i hpoe you accept my reaquest
Anonymous
Dear Sir\Madam.

i am very excited to write a letter to you. My name is Emmy Johnson, i am 18 years old Norwegian girl . I live with my parents and

I am my last year in Secondary School .Your school is one of my favorate schools that i am very interetsed in to start.

i hpoe you accept my reaquest

Dear Sir\Madam.

I feel very excited while writing you this letter. Let me introduce myself:

my name is Emmy Johnson, I am 18 years old, and I come from Norway.

I live with my parents and I'm attending my last year in Secondary School.

Your school is one of those I'm most interested in.

I hope that you will accept my request.

Actually I think that's not much, however I corrected it.

Best Wishes,

=YoHf=
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Anonymous:
T-R-Y-I-N-G iS HOW YOU SPELL TRYING.Emotion: smile
i am very excited to write a letter to you. ] This sounds a little strange. Do you mean you're very pleased to be writing the letter?

i am 18 years old Norwegian girl .] I am an eighteen-year-old Norwegian girl

I live with my parents and I am in my last year at Secondary School .

Your school is one of my favorate schools that i am very interetsed in to start.] This doesn't quite convey the meaning you intend – did you want to try again?

i hpoe you accept my reaquest ] I hope you agree to my request.

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<I feel very excited while writing you this letter.>

This sounds a little peculiar. It could easily be misinterpreted...

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Anonymous:
Dear Sir/Madam

I kindly would like to ask you to send me an application form for a bursary.

Yours faithful

Sixolile Mthethwa
Dear Sir or Madam:

I would like to ask you to kindly send me an application form for a bursary.

Yours faithfully,
Sixolile Mthethwa
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