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Latest post Sun, Nov 18 2007 12:48 AM by Mister Micawber. 3 replies.
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Anonymous  +  435805 Sun, 28 Oct 07 06:06 AM

Dear all,

I 'm so poor english pls hepl me in this sentence which 's a part my cover letter.

"I have strong interest in marketing field especially in Brading,CRM and with my commercial sense,my entrepreneurial ownership and

 keep track of  news in  economics  .that will contribute to your business success.

 

thnaks in advance

thai
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Mister Micawber  +  435849 Sun, 28 Oct 07 08:37 AM

Sorry, but I cannot quite understand what you want to say in your sentence.  Could you write it again, please?
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Anonymous, 2 yr 6 days ago

I apologize for my unclear in above quetion.

I mean,I apply a job for marketing position but I didn't finished in this field and I would like to show that I have some knowledge of marketing field.(Branding,CRM)

Thank you so much for your time and appreciate with your promth ly reply.

thai

Mister Micawber  +  443739 Sun, 18 Nov 07 12:48 AM

But I don't understand what the large type has to do with the small type, thai--

"I have strong interest in marketing field especially in Brading,CRM and with my commercial sense,my entrepreneurial ownership and

 keep track of  news in  economics  .that will contribute to your business success.
Mister Micawber
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