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Cute572

 Hanging on the right hand wall was a picture in a silvery brown oval frame. Carries my childhood worry-free days.  This is an incomplete sentence which does not relate to the preceding sentence. Why does this picture reflect your carefree childhood days? What is in it that does this. Is it what is represented in the picture or the shape and placing of it that brings childhood to mind?

Can i write like this because word "brought" make sentence past tense/

Your original sentence was in the past. If you want this to be in the present, then all the verbs must be present: Hanging on the right hand wall is a picture in a silvery brown frame. It shows children playing happily on a beach and brings back the memory of carefree childhood days.

Cute572

Thanks Feebs!

I have few more sentences like this. Could you check whether they agree in subject-verb and tenses? 

1. At top surface of the table,On the table top I see a round vase holding [verb is appropriate? fine] the red roses with leaves, [comma we use?] and give [or use continous participal tense: giving?better to use this] an elegant look to my table.              

 2. Reflecting Mirror giving my room, an excess glow from sunrays, entering through the window.The mirror, reflecting the sun's rays as they come through the window, made my room glow.

 3. The curtain, hanging over a long rod,and swinging over with winds passing by moves in the breeze,and unintentionally touching my chair. 

 Tell me, is there any mistakes ? or puntuation errors as well .

 

Cute572,
<<<>>>On the polished top surface of table, there is a  round vase holding red roses with leaves, giving an elegant look to my table.

Believe me, I can see what you are trying to achieve.

If you want to paint a picture with words “On the polished surface of the table” and “red roses with leaves” are certainly the wrong colors in my opinion. Aside from the grammatical aspects, descriptive-style writing is rather tricky, and also quite personal because what seems stylish to one may seem like a “wrong color” to others. Having said that, I like to offer you my rendition of your version for your reference:

On the fine-polished dining table, a round antique vase decorated with beautifully arranged red roses was carefully placed at the center, adding to the table a touch of elegance.

Cute,

1) You can use either all present or all past.

2) Feebs did not seperate the subject from the verb. You are using the -ing form of the verb incorrectly.

           The curtain is hanging from a rod and is blowing in the breeze.

            The currtain, hanging from the rod, is blowing in the breeze and moves across my chair. The part in pink describes the curtain; it is NOT a verb.

            If you say "The curtain hanging and swinging" you do not have a verb.You only have two things describing the curtain.

3) A curtain does not have intentions. It cannot do something unintentionally.

4) The word is "rod."

5) "from the upper edge of the window" is a prepositional phrase. The direct object is "the curtain." The rod hold the curtain.

6) The soft curtain, hanging from a rod at the upper edge of the window, sways rhythmetically in the breeze, repeatedly brushing my chair. - Please note that sways is the verb.