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Ghai_prince13  #373248  Thu, 31 May 07 08:59 PM

3.3Imagine, that during your stay in the country,

Which language you study, you have invited in theatre.

Write the small letter to the friend about this event

 

Yesterday my cousin took me to the theatre. It’s my first visit to the theatre. There was a production Of the Royal Tyler plays “the contrast “in the theatre. I thought that actors in theatre play which makes it very boring. my cousin bought beforehand two tickets for a matinee performance. We came to the theatre long before the performance began. a sign at the entrance of the theatre of the theatre said that “house full”. It was good story with tragic end. We enjoyed every minute of it have you been to the theatre? Looking forward from you.

Kamal

19.3 Imagine, that you address to the conferences, devoted to a healthy way of life. Write the brief message on a role of a healthy feed or sports.

Nowadays a lot different problem occurs in our life. These day w are so busy that we neglect our health. The human body need exercise which helps the body to move around inside the body, a balance diet a healthy mind and physically fitness some simple steps of yoga which gives us metal peace which  is equally important to be healthy. It’s also important to go in for spots. Sport and physical exercise make us strong and healthy and help us to keep fit.

  
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Feebs11  #373349  Fri, 01 Jun 07 01:25 AM
 Ghai_prince13 wrote:

3.3Imagine, that during your stay in the country which language you study, you have are invited in to the theatre.

Write the small a short letter to the a friend about this event

 

Yesterday my cousin took me to the theatre. It’s my first visit to the theatre. There was a production Of the Royal Tyler [???] plays [? more than one ?] the contrast[Titles require capitalization]in the theatre. I thought that actors in theatre play which makes it very boring[meaningless sentence]. my cousin bought beforehand two tickets for a matinee performance. We came to the theatre long before the performance began. a sign at the entrance of the theatre of the theatre said that House Full”. It was good story with tragic end. We enjoyed every minute of it have you been to the theatre? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Kamal

19.3 Imagine that you address to the conferences,a conference devoted to a healthy way of life. Write a brief message on the role of a healthy food or sports.


Nowadays a lot different problem occurs in our life. These day w are so busy that we neglect our health. The human body need exercise which helps the body to move around inside the body [what does this mean?], a balance diet, a healthy mind and physically fitness some simple steps of yoga which gives us metal peace which  is equally important to be healthy. It’s also important to go in for spots. Sport and physical exercise make us strong and healthy and help us to keep fit.   This paragraph does not match the requirement of the exercise, which is "a brief message on the role of a healthy food or sport(s)". It is a general statement.

  
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