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Love_suicide wrote:

hi everyone i need someone to correct my paragraph        vehicle               The vehicle is the first of the necessities of life, there is not a single household without one and even more than one.   The advantage of allowing individuals to own more than one vehicle is when it's out of order then another vehicle will be available. If one of the family or friends or neighbor needs to borrow the vehicle it will be possible for them . The disadvantages are that if there are a lot of vehicles it will impact on the environmental pollution because the smoke that comes out of it is harmful for humans, animals and plants. Expenses will increase and the money paid on the vehicles, such as for fuel, repairs and maintenance, cleaning, will lead to wasting water and money .also  Require a larger area if there is more than one vehicle. Many vehicles also require large areas   We have seen the advantages and disadvantages of allowing individuals to own more than one vehicle. And our conclusion is that the person must not have more than one vehicle unless necessary and the financial resources.

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Newmoon1805 wrote:

vehicle The vehicle is one of the necessities of life. There is not a single house without a vehicle. Some houses have more than one. The advantage of allowing individuals to own more than one vehicle is that when one vehicle is  out of order, then there will be another vehicle as an alternative. If one of the family members, friends, or neighbors needs to borrow the vehicle, it will be possible for them to do so. The disadvantages are: If there are lot of vehicles, it will pollute the environment, because the smoke that comes out is harmful to human beings, animals, and plants. Expenses will increase and much/lots of money will be spent on the vehicles for fuel, repairs, maintenance, and also cleaning, which leads to wastage of water. If there is more than one vehicle it requires a large area to park. We have seen the advantages and disadvantages of allowing individuals to own more than one vehicle. Our conclusion is that a person must not have more than one vehicle, unless it is absolutely necessary, and the person has the financial capacity to own and maintain the vehicles.