bubu prasant  +  89083 Tue, 12 Apr 05 02:15 AM Hallo I have tried to rephrase a paragraph below. How else can I do it? "The coach never changed the fresher's natural style. But he only finetuned it.He helped him to develop the right kind of temperament for the game." The coach never interfered with the original[or individual,own] way the beginner played the game.He only streamlined his technique....[I can't do the last line because I don't know how to rephrase temperamnet.] thank you. bubu prasant Joined on Thu, May 13 2004 Full Member 147 prasant mishra Paragraphs

	abbie1948  +  89332 Tue, 12 Apr 05 06:58 PM The young man had an intuitive feel for the game, which the coach developed, whilst assisting him to adopt the correct attitudes. abbie1948 Joined on Thu, Mar 24 2005 England Senior Member 2,657 Hope that helps. Abbie