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#84931 Tue, 29 Mar 05 08:58 PM

My heart...which i hate the most
i wish you could die
without you i wouldn't know the meaning of pain
without you i would never be sad
without you my cheeks would never know the taste of tears
Heart go with him...and leave me happy alone

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broken heart

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the_mystic_dude

#85140 Wed, 30 Mar 05 04:33 PM

what's that supposed to be? a letter to your girlfriend? a dear john letter? a suicide letter? Smile [:)]

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