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Volcano1985  #346306  Mon, 02 Apr 07 01:51 PM

Hello

Anyone can check this poem if it has any mistake

 

 

The Heaven

What's that to me if the end of the world will come
If the way of  life will finish i want now
I have no fright;i am happy
I loved the love with you in my lifetime

The name of the lines on my face is you
You are the reason for my every breath

If i come to the world again my darling,
I will look for you,I will love you again
I don't change the heaven for a wire of your hair
I will love you as long as I live

  
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Mister Micawber  #346576  Tue, 03 Apr 07 01:44 AM

Some work has already been done on this HERE.

  
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