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Nin  +  132185 Tue, 30 Aug 05 01:18 PM

Well I just wanted some of poems with you all....Bear with me

1) The poem name is Mirror

Mirror O mirror,
Would you please do me a favor?
And not show me, her again
I can’t stand the sight
But still I have to do it day after day....
This is the part of that pain me most
Trying to hide who she is
Putting on a face that’s not hers
I see this girl everyday

She stars at me
A disgusting stare
Sometimes I want to break free
Want to tell her I know I was wrong..
But forgods sake cant u just forgive me once
or you be happy when u see me pain
I want to break everything thats there but
I break the mirror instead with me as a reflection
Maybe that will ease her and will forgive me
relieving me thro these pains...
Pains which takes my *** offf
these  pains those I carry everyday,everywhere.....

DONT MIND MUCH... BUT IF U DO I WOULD LIKE TO HERE YOUR COMMENTS!!

2) Feelings....

I wanted to like you
I wanted to love you
But I think I was expecting too much!!!!
So all just mend away...

What I did so wrong
that what I had was all gone.
Why I did those things
Which took us away...

Now what should I do??
Surrender myself infront of Dark night that crwals by..
which revels all the secrets pains i have in me?
These things gives me pain
Everyday I feel the same
And I ask myself why she is being so INSANE???

Nin


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Mister Micawber  +  132213 Tue, 30 Aug 05 03:07 PM

Hi Nin-- Welcome to English Forums.  I'm moving your post to our Poetry Forum.


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Mister Micawber  +  132345 Wed, 31 Aug 05 01:05 AM
Hello Nin,

Please check your spelling, eliminate all the exclamation marks, asterisks, and all-capital words, and punctuate the poem as you would any English sentences.


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