Anonymous  +  917129 Sat, 26 Sep 09 12:23 AM Revise any weak, unemphatic sentences by replacing be verbs or passive verbs with active alternatives and, if necessary, by naming in the person or thing doing the action. Some sentences are emphatic; do not change them.   1. A strange sound was made in the willow tree by the monkey that had escaped from the zoo.   2.Her letter was in acknowledgement of the student's participation in the literacy program.   3.The bomb bay doors rumbled open, and freezing air whipped through the plane.   4. The work of Paul Oakenfold and Sandra Collins was influential in my choice of music for my    audition.   5.The only responsibility I was given by my parents was putting gas in the brand-new Volkswagen GTI they bought me my senior year. Anonymous Arts, Sentences, Plants, Music

	Clive  +  917131 Sat, 26 Sep 09 12:33 AM Hi, Are you asking us to do your assignment for you?   Clive Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 29,600 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo

	CalifJim  +  917163 Sat, 26 Sep 09 03:51 AM Anonymous “Revise any weak, unemphatic sentences by replacing be verbs or passive verbs with active alternatives and, if necessary, by naming in the person or thing doing the action. Some sentences are emphatic; do not change them. ” These instructions were written for you to follow.   When you don't even try, you appear to others as if you are just too lazy or too stupid to do your own work.  You don't want people thinking that about you, do you?  So try them yourself, and we'll check your work. CJ CalifJim Joined on Mon, Aug 2 2004 California Veteran Member 22,393 "There are no facts, only interpretations" - Nietzsche Sentences