Prescriptive essay on My Brother

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I have one brother and we had spent almost our childhood together.My brother has a dark hair, a light-skinned and have a chinese look inherited by our father.I think my brother is quite handsome guy like my father and he has thick eye brows.He like to read maggazine and do a lot of boy stuff.He also love to play musical instrument especially guitar and I think he such a telented boy.He is approximately 175 cm tall and I think he is quite tall compared to his other friends.He like to wear short pant with kasual t-shirt.He kinda lovely guy i've ever known because he likes animal very much especially cats.He always spend his leisure time playing with his own cat and the way he take care this animal showing that he is a such responsible guy.He always help me when I'm in need especially when I have trouble with my financial problem.He give me full of support in everything I did and I love him very much.
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you have some mistakes when you writing like ......he likes to read magazine and do a lot of stuff
he also loves to play ............
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I have one brother and we have spent almost all our childhood together. My brother has dark hair, thick eyebrows, light skin and a chinese look inherited from our father.I think my brother is quite a handsome guy like my father.He likes to read magazines and to do a lot of boy stuff.He also loves to play musical instruments, especially the guitar. I think he is a very talented boy. He is approximately 175 cm tall and I think he is quite tall compared to his other friends. He likes to wear shorts with casual t-shirts. He is one of the loveliest guys I know, and(is he one of the loveliest guys you know only because he likes animals?) he likes animals very much - especially cats. He always spends his leisure time playing with his cat and the way he takes care of this animal shows that he is a very responsible guy.He always helps me when I'm in need, especially when I have trouble with my finances. He gives me full support in everything I do and I love him very much.

It's clear that you certainly do adore your brother. However, it would help if you included some negative things about him, some funny moments, or some particular moment of time that you have shared. That will make the essay more interesting.

Good luck,

- Joy
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Anonymous:

gud !!!!!!!!!

Anonymous:
very good
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