Product description - please correct.

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Josepinto  #485416  Wed, 05 Mar 08 10:29 PM
Dear all,

I'm witting a product description and I was wondering a good way to do it. Even though it looks correct it sounds a bit "strange". I would appreciate any help.  Thank you very much.


This unique piece is ideal for storage usage, both at home and at the office. It presents a wide range of dimensions and different carefully calculated proportions. The “facade” can be filled with doors and/or drawers.

  
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Feebs11  #485443  Thu, 06 Mar 08 01:03 AM


This clever piece of furniture is ideal for storage usage, both at home and at the office. It is produced in a wide range of dimensions and different carefully calculated proportions, and can be fitted with doors and/or drawers.


  
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Anonymous  #485538  Thu, 06 Mar 08 08:28 AM
Hi Guru,

 

And again, thank you very much for your help!

:josé 

  
Parry07  #485752  Thu, 06 Mar 08 06:22 PM

This clever piece of furniture is ideal for storage usage.

It think storage itself convey an idea of use. So I feel the sententese will look nice if we remove usage.

  
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