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Anonymous  #461968  Tue, 08 Jan 08 10:30 PM
Please review the following.  Does it make sense?  Don't worry about context.

You need to bestow a thesaurus Soy, so that you can modulate learned and acquaintance. Mortals are roused by superincumbent jargon, and will ameliorate to you with husky obeisance. Inspect A Moral Center... Do Mortals not ameliorate him for his sapience and penetration? Indeed, Mortals sincerely appetite his penetration, as it is very heavenly.

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Clive  #461976  Tue, 08 Jan 08 11:39 PM

Hi,

This reads like it was written by a computer, using random words from the dictionary and a few very simple grammar struuctures.

Best wishes, Clive Big Smile [:D]

  
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Grammar Geek  #462016  Wed, 09 Jan 08 02:35 AM

The graphics program used in our company has a feature called "Jabberwok" and it fills the areas allocated by text with randomly generated words in a grammatically suitable way. This reads just like it!

  
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Clive  #462056  Wed, 09 Jan 08 05:37 AM

Hi GG,

Now may be a good time to confess that I use "Jabberwok" for most of the replies that I post here on the Forum. Stick out tongue [:P]

Clive

  
Grammar Geek  #462071  Wed, 09 Jan 08 06:32 AM

Until I see you use "somnambulant warthogs" I won't believe you.

  
Verade  #462145  Wed, 09 Jan 08 09:55 AM
I love that 'Mortals' can now 'appetite' with impunity!
  
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