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Ruriko  #209410  Sat, 25 Mar 06 06:28 AM
Can someone please proofread my rolls&responsibilities document. I need help to make this document longer to fit on one page and If i'm missing any rolls or responsibilites please include them. Here is the brief outline that the document is based on http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2029/brief6bu.gif
  
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Clive  #209681  Sun, 26 Mar 06 08:16 AM

Hi Ruriko,

Welcome to the Forum.

I think people would prefer you to post the actual text here for them to look at.

Best wishes, Clive 

  
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Ruriko  #210016  Mon, 27 Mar 06 11:49 AM
Here ya go...

Rolls & Responsibilities

Who’s responsible for what?

Client liaison – Nikki
Management – Nikki

Nikki – Has the role of client liaison. The responsibility of managing the project. Script the dialog. Direct shoot. Edit the video footage. Organise the delivery.

Bob – Authoring the DVDs, design the slicks, liaise with the DVD printers. All answerable to Nikki.

Client – Provide expertise that will be showing a demo on how to use a key cutting machine. Provide us the location where they will be giving us a demonstration. Provide actors & graphics.

Mandy – Will be shooting the video. All answerable to Nikki.

Harry - Will be recoding the audio. All answerable to Nikki.

Lawyer – Design the copyright contract for future DVD printing copies.

Actors – Will be acting in the key cutting demonstration.

Experts – They will provide advice on how to use the key cutting machine and will have the final technical say on content.

  
Clive  #210045  Mon, 27 Mar 06 02:51 PM

Hi,

Roles & Responsibilities

Who’s responsible for what?

Nikki – Overall project management and liaison with client. Script dialog. Direct shoot. Edit video footage. Organise delivery.

Bob – Write ? DVDs, design slicks, liaise with DVD printers. 

Client – Provide expertise and give a demo on key cutting machine, location to be specified. Provide actors & graphics.

Mandy – Shoot video. 

Harry - Recode audio. 

Lawyer – Design copyright contract for future DVD printing copies.

Actors – Peform in key cutting demo.

Experts – Provide advice on use of key cutting machine, decide on technical content.

(If you're the manager, they all answer to you - even the client, in a sense)

Best wishes, Clive

  
Ruriko  #210179  Tue, 28 Mar 06 02:03 AM
Can you help me make this longer? I need it to fit on one page and right now it's only half a page. Also if i left out some roles&responsibilities please tell them. Here's the brief description that the roles&responsibilities is based on

  
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