proofreading#24

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#300864 Tue, 05 Dec 06 03:22 PM

The primate animals showed their soulful and fearful on his eyes when I looked at them. The gibbons have been captivated in the zoo for a long time. The zoo provides them with couples of acre to live. Sometimes the zoo employees give food to them through gird fences. It is sort of animals and humans interacting. Their hands are agile and dexterous. They swing all days long on the bars. The animals are monogamous. They are very family oriented. A visitor can tell which female or male gibbon is. The mother always cares about its babies

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nona the brit

#300875 Tue, 05 Dec 06 03:37 PM

Every time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website.
This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round.

He knows he has to try as much as he would like. 'as hard as he can'

freaking-desire. hyphen is incorrect and also freaking would be taken as a euphamism for certain swear word: f *** king. Is that what you intended?

(The site is something) he would enjoy very much. For the first time he wish (wishes or wished) he was some sort of reckless hacker that could break into someone's computer. He is very interested in (knowing) what is (on) the Website.

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#300894 Tue, 05 Dec 06 04:06 PM

Nona The Brit wrote:
Every time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website. This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round. .

Thank you Nona,

How do I fix it?

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Darkjackass1234

#300901 Tue, 05 Dec 06 04:26 PM

Nona The Brit wrote:
Every time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website. This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round. He knows he has to try as much as he would like. 'as hard as he can' freaking-desire. hyphen is incorrect and also freaking would be taken as a euphamism for certain swear word: f *** king. Is that what you intended? (The site is something) he would enjoy very much. For the first time he wish (wishes or wished) he was some sort of reckless hacker that could break into someone's computer. He is very interested in (knowing) what is (on) the Website.

what about that animals rights or story

i'm really don't understand

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nona the brit

#300912 Tue, 05 Dec 06 05:09 PM

John bites his lips everytime he is blocked from his favourite website.

Darkjackass - what don't you understand?This is nothing to do with animal rights.

nona the brit

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Feebs11

#301074 Wed, 06 Dec 06 03:37 AM

I think Darkjackass is confused in that this posting starts with a piece about gibbons, whereas "proofreading#25" is the piece about being blocked from the website

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nona the brit

#301194 Wed, 06 Dec 06 11:58 AM

oh gosh how did that happen? Sorry!

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Darkjackass1234

#301579 Thu, 07 Dec 06 03:34 PM

Feebs11 wrote:
I think Darkjackass is confused in that this posting starts with a piece about gibbons, whereas "proofreading#25" is the piece about being blocked from the website

in fact , first look don't understand what are talk about in this paragraphe, i can saying sorry for i come here

Darkjackass1234

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