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Anonymous  +  957809 Sat, 31 Oct 09 05:31 AM

Hi,

 

I would like to ask for a help. I like writing, but my problem is, I am not confident enough with my grammar. I did some short one, please help me how to correct it. I would much appreciate if I would be seeing the corrections from this letter i made, for me to improve my writing. I will be posting it below. Thak you.

 

Its 12:06 am of Oct 31, 2009 one day before it will spin to Nov 1. I told myself a week ago, what bible verse should I share with my family since it’s my turn to present one, I’ve been thinking it all over  and over again but then still undecided what to share to all of you. I told myself, I want something that has significance to my life. Until, I have reached this date.

It’s 12:30 am and it’s time to go to bed, time to read the Bible and time to spend with the Lord before sleeping. Before I opened my bible, I used to open the Daily Bread first as my guide of what verse should I read. Usually, I don’t follow the dates according to Daily Bread; I will just choose what I like. But this time, I told myself, Ok I will choose the last page since today is the last day of October, for now I will follow the date that has been indicated in the Daily Bread.

And now it’s time for me to read the verse from the Bible. The title is “KEEP RUNNING” Before I opened my Bible I have asked the Lord’s guidance and, said... Lord, please help me understand your word; I want to know the significance of this verse in my life today.

Ok my dear brothers and sisters...our bible verse for this month of November is taken from the book of Hebrews 12: 1-3 “LET US RUN WITH ENDURANCE THE RACE THAT IS SET BEFORE US...” There is a race that is set before us and, we are to keep running until we reach the finish line. No one is too old to serve God. We must keep growing, maturing and serving to the end of our days. It's always too soon to quit!

 

Please check this for me. thank you!

 
Anonymous
Anonymous, 22 days ago

Its 12:06 am of Oct 31, 2009 one day before it will spin to Nov 1. I asked myself a week ago, what bible verse should I share with my family since it’s my turn to present one? I’ve been thinking about it over and over again but I'm still undecided with what to share with all of you. I told myself, I want something that has a significance in my life. Until, I have reached this date.

It’s 12:30 am and it’s time to go to bed, time to read the Bible and time to spend with the Lord before sleeping. Before I opened my bible, I used to open the Daily Bread first as my guide of what verse I should read. Usually, I don’t follow the dates according to Daily Bread, I will just choose what I like. But this time, I told myself, I will choose the last page, since today is the last day of October, so for now, I will follow the date that has been indicated in the Daily Bread.

 Now it’s time for me to read the verse from the Bible. The title is Keep Running. Before I opened my Bible, I asked for the Lord’s guidance and, said "Lord, please help me understand your word; I want to know the significance of this verse in my life today."

 My dear brothers and sisters, our Bible verse for this month of November is taken from the book of Hebrews 12: 1-3 Let Us Run With Endurance the Race That Is Set Before Us. There is a race that is set before us and we are to keep running until we reach the finish line. No one is too old to serve God. We must keep growing, maturing and serving 'til the end of our days. It's always too soon to quit!

 

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