Anonymous  +  960949 Tue, 03 Nov 09 09:00 PM If a character thinks in a story do you use speech marks round the thought like speech?  i.e. "Oh bother," he thought. Anonymous

	jemaasjr  +  961050 Tue, 03 Nov 09 11:54 PM The problem you have is that quotation marks are supposed to indicate an exact quote, not a general rehash of what was said or thought. Maybe you could have your character talk to himself, as "Oh Brother," he said too himself, wondering what was coming next. I wouldn't get into this sort of thing very much. jemaasjr Joined on Wed, Sep 30 2009 Full Member 136 JohnnyBoy Punctuation, Quotation Marks