Hello, I have this profile due in three days and
i need help making it sound rich and grammatically correct. You might recall
this because i posted something similar earlier but this version if very
different. This is the most important post in the world to me, please correct
properly, thanks
Describe up to two qualities that you possess that you feel would make you a
good candidate for engineering at U of T. Your answer should not exceed 150
words.
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As a committed member of the Western Association
of Robotics Personnel for three years, I have developed outstanding leadership
and teamwork skills that I use on a daily basis. Hectic days with sleepless
night played off when our team defeated 80 others to win the Greater Toronto
Regional and we went to compete for the national Championship in Atlanta,
Georgia. Because of my hard work and dedication, I was promoted to head of the
electrical team by my second year. When my teachers saw how interested I was in
engineering, they recommended U of T Engineering Enrichment Program, which I
entered with fascination and enthusiasm. DEEP has shown me just how exciting hands-on
work can be, and Saturday Science Academy has inspired me once again and has given
me a great insight of University education.
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