Thank you.
As to No. 1, I posted previously with the following two sentences and asked whether these are fine grammatically.
I think the answer or response to that post was this: You need some kind of an object.
The sentences I posted were/are???:
Please let me know if getting better.
Please let me know if done right.
Don't they have the elliptical structure that are workable??? in terms of their writing style or sentential structure ?
Sorry, this just came up. Should the underlined and colored part be were or are?
As to No.2, I think a post in this forum had this reply to the issue of whether the "noun plus participle" structure require the hyphen: The hyphen is not necessary. Please look at the thread titled "Noun + participle always with hyphen?".