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d_say  +  956017 Thu, 29 Oct 09 06:28 AM
Please review the letter a established firm has to request for pre qualify for next tenders. The company has not much experience except little outdoor advertising services and distribution. In order to achieve the tender we need to introduce ourselves as a trader. Now Please assist me with your kind assistance.

 

"

 

The Director,

ABC Org

1234

 

Dear Sir,

 

We are pleased to introduce about Gazy Enterprise. Our company is established in 1998, since then we have been in the field of distribution, and outdoor advertising. We have achieved a good market share in order to provide excellent services and that is the core value of our organization to enhance our business relationships.

 

As ABC organization aims to manage the existing fertilizer plants and also to establish additional fertilizer production facilities in the country in public sector. We hereby assure you the quality services and availability of stock in time. If an opportunity is given to us we will not leave any stone unturned.

 

We are looking forward to your kind consideration and obliged.

 

Thank you,

 

Sincerely,

 

A. Deee

Director

 

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renktsin  +  956024 Thu, 29 Oct 09 06:49 AM
The letter is good d_say.

But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company.

Your intro letter should have all the details about your share market status, your profit and loss ratio evrything.

So that the other Firm can get to know about your company in one Snap Shot.

 

 

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nero_placid  +  956026 Thu, 29 Oct 09 06:52 AM
We are pleased to introduce "you" about Gazy Enterprise


and give some more historical background about the company,


and make it more impressive so it could get a good look for your client. or to anybody who could read it

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renktsin  +  956029 Thu, 29 Oct 09 06:55 AM
Hello d_say.. Well your letter is good.

But its too short for the other Firm to get to know about your company.

Your Intro Letter should have all the information about your company right from its status in share market, profit and loss ratio of the last decade, etc..

Your Intro Letter should be such that the other party can get to know about your company in one Snap Shot..

So give some more information.

 

And last line should be

"We are looking forward in doing business together in future with you"

 

Thats all I can suggest d_say...

 

d_say  +  956032 Thu, 29 Oct 09 07:01 AM
renktsin Thank you,

 

So kind and grateful to you for your quick response in this regard.

 

 

Moreover, I am not able to put more light on the background because the firm is new in operation. Since the establishment of the firm it has not been in much business activities. This is a drawback..

 

Thanks n Warm regards renktsin

 

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d_say  +  956037 Thu, 29 Oct 09 07:05 AM
nero_placid thank you

 

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