I have a test next Sunday, I have some writing and I want to make sure that they are free from errors..
Writing an Informal Letter
Dear Ahmed,
Let me introduce myself. My name is Hassan and i have just found out I am a cousin of yours!
I am kind of interested in the history of our family so I have started doing some research. I have found out that my grand father, Ali, came over to Bahrain in the 1920s after leaving KSA. He was the brother of your granddad "Khaled".
Well here is some info a bout me. I live in Manama with my family. There are bouts fifty of us altogether here! Here is a picture of some of us. I am the first one on the left.
Anyway cousin "can I call you that?", can you do me a favor? Can you send me a photo of your family? It would be great if you could also send me any info a bout your folks back in the "old country".
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Hassan Isa
Writing a Formal Letter
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your letter a bout the English courses at Exmoor English College. I am really interested in studying in the college for the summer courses.
Here is my information. My name is Hassan. I am student at Ahmed Alomran Secondary School in sciencfitc section. I study a lot of subjects like maths chemistry and English. I am interested in English and my English is advanced.
Please send me your agreement or disagreement to join to Exmoor College.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hassan Isa