Hi everybody, I'm in charge of writing a recommendation letter. It took me days to compose one as you can see below.
Would you mind checking this letter and posting your comments?
Thank you in advance.
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January 3rd, 2007
[Address]
Dear Sir or
Madame,
I am the assistance to the director
of [program]. The program is cooperation with French government and the objective
is to train and equip the top Vietnamese excellent students with high engineering
and managing competence.
I daily teach and work with
students therefore I have opportunities to realize outstanding students. I
highly recommended Mr. X for your program in the Industrial Management master
course. He is one of the most talent students I’ve ever met.
Mr. X is a confident, enthusiastic and
industrious person. He always accomplished all assignments and he knew how to
handle problems and how to achieve group’s goals as a team leader. He is not
only resourceful but creative as well.
I was dramatically impressed by his
thesis and English presentation. And that he was graded 16/20, the highest
score in Mechanical class, by Prof. DG was an excellent evidence of his ability.
I believe that if granted to study in your university, he will do his best to
be a great engineering manager.
Based on my experience, I can
unreservedly recommend Mr. X to you for the Industrial Management master course.
If you would like further elaboration, feel free to call me (084) (08) (-) or
via email: ***@***.com.
Sincerely,