Hello,
This is basically good and I've just tidied up one or two areas for you.
14th October,2005
Dear Sir/Madam,
Tag art gallery is a non-profit, artist run organization in ***, established to provide a fertile and creative environment for artists and to foster knowledge and communication about the arts. We introduce emerging artists in various media to the public through an ongoing exhibition schedule and a series of readings, perfomance and artist talks.
We, Tag art gallery, support Ms. Chen's theme and the direction of her research, which is trying to re-model the structure of human reception of aesthetics by investigating how it has been traditionally applied to works of art.
We acknowledge her strong motivation to study the methodology of our organization, the art market and arts management (artist-in-residence, a non-profit gallery, open studio etc). It would be our pleasure to welcome her to participate in our program. She would be able to pursue her research, and learn about arts management through our activities, for one year from 1st April 2006 to 30th March 2007.
We make a petition to grant a scholarship/bursary/financial award? to Ms. Chen.
Thank you for your understanding.
Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully as you do not know the name of the person you are writing to; Yours sincerely if it is addressed to a specific person.
Mina Sumat
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Tag art gallery
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