Hi,

Please give me your kind comments/remarks/correction about the letter I wrote and help me to improve it.

best regards,
mariann

Dear Madam/Sir!

My name is x y, now i am working for the Hungarian Embassy in z, as a consulate administrator. I am always interested in music, as i am Hungarian, mainly the Hungarian music. Earlier I organised concerts and music festivals, then i worked in an on-line music magazine, now I am doing my best to acquaint the Hungarian bands and musicians in a. In Hungary there are a lot of talented musicians, unfortunately without having proper financial and professional support they are not known outside of Hungary. I think, i will do my all that the Hungarian music become well-known.

With moving to a I decided to hunt up the facilities. I think I will support the most talented musician in Hungary. I believed he could represent the Hungarian music becomingly. He is B C. In spite of his youth he has already made a hit! His second album - called D D released in November 2004. I enclosed this album to You! I should like you to listen to it, report on it, advise me and we could discuss about the releasing in a.

With the possible releasing I should try to make a carrier for C consciously.
I would if he had some live acts in E, or in the other parts of A. My aim is not the popularity with these live acts, I would that B should play in proper level. Unfortunately in Hungary this haven't been running for years. In our country there are no money for proper sound system, lights or simple a good concert. I would that C may show up, where people lay store by good music. Because he is a musician in Hungary it set a limit to his talent.

At the rating of the album You don't leave C B's results out of consideration! Many re-mixers (Paul Rogers, Fandora, Easy Life Natural, Mannel, Pluto Project, Banyek) made remixes for his song and released on many compilation discs around Europe - like in France, German, Brittan, Holland, Greece, and Italy. B also worked with other artist in Hungary and abroad - like Addie Brik (singer from the early Red Hot Chilli Peppers), co-produced a Hungarian pop band (Ízis - Sony Music), written film score ('A Valóság' - Independent), made video game music and effects ('Sir Arthur') and composed music for a play. An English records is interested in his second album too.

I hope I arouse Your interest!

I request the favour of a reply at your earliest convenience!

Best regards,

X Y
(contact: X@y.com)

P. S.: I am so sorry to send to You just a copy of the album! Fortunately, D D have been selling very well in Hungary and now it is running out! If you are interested in C B's album seriously, please tell me, and I will send you one from the second edition!

Thanks for your kindness!I hope it is better, than the former version...please correct it! thank you very much:)

Dear Madam/Sir,

My name is Mariann Lévai. I would like to present Dani Karányi, he said to be the most talented musician in Hungary. In spite of his youth he has already made a hit. I would like to promote him in Sweden, and I hope you could help me to release Karányi’s second album.

Dani Karányi was born Budapest, Hungary, in 1982. He learnt classical piano for over 6 years, and he loved the early progressive rock bands. After a while he began to make own music on his first computer and he made a lot of experimental track. When he was 18, he released his first album called ’Oktogon’. Dani became famous by ’Dallam’. Many remixers made remixes for this song and relased on many compilation discs around Europe. Dani also worked with other artist in Hungary and abroad – like Addie Brik (singer form the early Red Hot Chilli Peppers), co-produced a Hungarian pop band, written film score, made videogame music and effects and composed music for a play.

In April 2004 he made his first EP called Road to Home. The new material is much different like before: more popular, more exciting then ever. This is the first only-on-Internet EP in Hungary. Many artist made their remixes for Road To Home. The Road To Home video is different too like most of the Hungarian videos. It’s fully 3D designed action video.

The second album – called DIGITAL DIGITAL released in November 2004. Many new artists collaborated on this album. The second album is more exciting like before. Most of the tracks are faster, stronger and popular inspirated by UK garage, break beat and classical music. An English record is interested in his second album too.

I am always interested in music, as I am Hungarian, mainly the Hungarian music. Earlier I organised concerts and music festivals, then I worked in an on-line music magazine, now I am doing my best to acquaint the Hungarian bands and musicians in Sweden. In Hungary there are a lot of talented musicians, unfortunately without having proper financial and professional support they are not known outside of Hungary. I think, I will do my all that the Hungarian music become well-known. With moving to Sweden I decided to hunt up the facilities. I think I will support the most talented musician in Hungary. I believed he could represent the Hungarian music becomingly.

With the possible releasing I should try to make a carrier for Karányi consciously.
I would if he had some live acts in Stockholm, or in the other parts of Sweden. My aim is not the popularity with these live acts, I would that Dani should play in proper level. Unfortunately in Hungary this haven't been running for years. In our country there are no money for proper sound system, lights or simple a good concert. I would that Karányi may show up, where people lay store by good music. Because he is a musician in Hungary it set a limit to his talent.

I request the favour of a reply at your earliest convenience!

Thanks,

Mariann Lévai