Anonymous  +  176463 Fri, 30 Dec 05 01:40 PM As I read your poems O Master My heart melts my soul rejoices Energy pours out through my spine A harvest of peace surrounds me I contemplate deep on your words Overwhelmed as I read out the verse The novelty breeds divine presence Silence reflects through the heavens The eternal longing for the divine Is heard deep within! Om! Anonymous

	Mister Micawber  +  176466 Fri, 30 Dec 05 01:44 PM If you are going to impose exclamation marks at the end, you should punctuate the whole piece. Mister Micawber Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004 Yokohama Veteran Member 30,773 'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.' Exclamation Marks

	YoHf  +  176702 Fri, 30 Dec 05 09:16 PM I appreciated the fact that you chose not to punctuate your piece... I tend to do it as well... YoHf Joined on Wed, Oct 26 2005 Senior Member 3,347 Shinichi Okazaki.