panzerotto  +  661429 Tue, 03 Feb 09 04:57 AM Normal 0 false false false EN-CA X-NONE X-NONE Hi everyone! I'm an ESL student. I wrote this little poem for fun and I was wondering if someone can check it for grammar errors. Any help, comments or criticisms will be appreciated. Refugees   In this land we brought Our hearts and souls And the hope to see a new sun Raising above our frozen wake.   Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice And warm up our body to a new born Or give us strength to overcome the fear And stand up to say: nevermore? panzerotto Joined on Tue, Feb 3 2009 Coquitlam BC, Canada New Member 06 Poetry, Writing, Students, ESL, Mistakes

	Mister Micawber  +  661768 Tue, 03 Feb 09 01:18 PM . In this land we brought Our hearts and souls And the hope of seeing a new sun Rising above our frozen wake. Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice And warm our bodies in a new birth Or give us strength to overcome the fear And stand up to say "Nevermore"? Mister Micawber Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004 Yokohama Veteran Member 30,803 'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.'