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Latest post Mon, Aug 21 2006 3:35 PM by Mister Micawber. 1 replies.
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Jc95132  +  257533 Sun, 20 Aug 06 06:38 AM

Hi everyone, good evening?

Could anyone be so kind of as to proof my letter for me?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I wanted to say thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about the programmer's position in your company. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

After speaking with you, I do feel that I would be a perfect candidate for this position, offering adaptability that is needed for this position.

In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I would bring the technical and analytical skills necessary to get the jobs done. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position.

Best wishes to everyone Smile [:)]
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Mister Micawber  +  257907 Mon, 21 Aug 06 03:35 PM

Fine, JC.  I would suggest only 3 very minor changes:


Dear Mr. Smith,

I wanted to say thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about the programmer's position in your company. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

After speaking with you, I do feel that I would be a perfect candidate for this position, offering the adaptability that is needed for this position.

In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I would bring the technical and analytical skills necessary to get the job done. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decision is made regarding this position.


Mister Micawber
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