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New2grammar  #524410  Sun, 08 Jun 08 03:38 AM

Fine, I get all that. I understand why the government had to raise fuel prices and I understand why people are upset. So, protest. Hold a peaceful rally somewhere and make your point. Tell the government you are angry, make your demands. But a bandh?! How does it help to bring a heaving city to a grinding halt for two days?

Not only is it a massive headache for calcuttans, imagine the financial cost to the city of two lost working days.

Can I rephrase the bolded word as "the financial cost of two lost working days to the city"?

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Avangi  #524419  Sun, 08 Jun 08 04:24 AM

Your version wouldn't sound natural to my ear.  I can't exactly say it's ambiguous, but I keep reading it over to be sure what it means.

I guess it's okay, but I'd use the original.  No, it's not ambiguous.  I'm just expecting something else  -   like, two lost working days to the city means something else.

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