The original sentence is
Yet many schools across the country have reduced
their physical education programs. Criticism of the cuts has led in
some places to efforts to give students more time for exercise, not
less.
can i change like this
Yet many schools across the country have reduced
their physical education programs. Criticism of the lack of physical educations has led in
some places to efforts to give students more time for exercise, not
less.
does it give the same meaning with original sentence?
please help me ..
i'm very beginner for english language.....