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Jan_ali1919  #485702  Thu, 06 Mar 08 03:28 PM

 

please help me to correct my letter. this is in response to the agreement i recieved from another company.

 

6 March 2008

 

DR AL KHATAB

Managing Director

XYZ Company

 

Sir;

 

This is to inform you that I received the agreement form that you sent to me thru my email last 5 March 2008. In this regard, I would like to express my interest to accept your job offer based in Saudi Arabia and to join to your company within the acceptable time frame to both of us. Kindly clarify also the matter if how long you can wait me in order to join to your company? Because at this time, I’m already scheduled to take my annual vacation leave starting 16 April 2008 to 15 May 2008. I would like to take this opportunity also to enable me to visit my family before starting to work to a new company.

 

Please advice me your decision at earliest time possible so that I can arrange to my present employer my remaining works and my resignation.

 

Please note also that as per agreement with my current employer, I’m required to give one month notice period prior to resignation.

 

I earnestly hope that the above mentioned will be given consideration. 

  

Sincerely

 

John smith

  

P.S.

 

Please find the attached accomplished agreement form.

 

  
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Feebs11  #485861  Fri, 07 Mar 08 01:36 AM

Jan_ali1919

 

please help me to correct my letter. this is in response to the agreement i recieved from another company.

 

6 March 2008

 

DR AL KHATAB

Managing Director

XYZ Company

 

Dear Dr. al Khatab,

 This is to inform you that I received the agreement form that you sent to me by e-mail on 5 March 2008.

In this regard, I would like to express my interest to accept your job offer based in Saudi Arabia and to join to your company within an acceptable time frame to both of us. Kindly clarify also the matter if  Please clarify how long you can wait me in order to before I join to your company. Because at this time, I’m already scheduled to take my annual vacation leave starting 16 April 2008 to 15 May 2008 and have already made arrangements that will not be easy to change since I shall be visiting  I would like to take this opportunity also to enable me to visit my family before starting a new job. 

Please note also that as per agreement with my current employer, I’m required to give one month's notice period prior to resignation. Please advise me of your decision at earliest time possible as soon as possible so that I can arrange to my present employer my remaining works and my resignation.hand in my notice and arrange the completion of my current work.

I have attached the completed agreement form, and look forward to hearing from you about the above.
 

Yours sincerely,

John Smith

  

P.S.

 

Please find the attached accomplished agreement form.

 

 
  
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Jan_ali1919  #485937  Fri, 07 Mar 08 07:39 AM

hi feebs11!

thank you so much to your time and efforts in  helping me to correct my letter.

its really a great help..again thank you so much feeebs11 god bless!

jan

 

  
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