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Latest post Wed, Oct 8 2008 3:58 PM by Sakota. 1 replies.
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littlebunny124  +  574350 Wed, 08 Oct 08 04:41 AM
Hello,
What do you think about this resume? Any comments or suggestions? And, please help me with my grammar too. Thank you very much for your time...

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OBJECTIVE

To acquire a position where I can utilize my knowledge and experience.


SUMMARY

·         General office skills including file, data entry, and schedule appointments.

·         Excellent customer service skills and phone manner.

·         Extensive computer training, which includes Microsoft Office, Internet, Photoshop, and ability to type 62 WPM.

·         Highly organized, dedicated, motivated, confident, and hard-working.

·         Capable of learning new concepts quickly, maintain effective relationships with others, and communicate ideas clearly and effectively.

·         Speak, read, and write Vietnamese fluently.


EXPERIENCE HIGHLIGHTS

·         Performed administrative and clerical support tasks with minimal supervision and completed 50% of the tutor request forms within two weeks after school started.

·         Arranged appointments for students with tutors and ensure students understand the Tutoring Contract’s policy.

·         Managed and maintained files, filing records, and students’ log-in database accurately.

·         Registered walk-in students and answered students’ questions and concerns

·         Maintained good relationships with administrators, tutors, and students.

·         Represented the Tutoring Center at MSCD Open Houses, Summer Festival, and Career Fairs and the Vietnamese culture at the Multicultural Event for the Immigration Services Program.

·         Contributed in creating the Tutoring Center Handbook and my method had been chosen to make the handbook.


WORK HISTORY

MSCD Tutoring Center, Denver, CO                                               Spring 2002

Administrative Assistant                                                                  2006 – 2007

Heritage Club, Denver, CO                                                                2003 – 2004

Wait Staff

MSCD Immigration Services Program, Denver, CO                       Summer 2001 & 2003

Student Assistant

MSCD Information Technology, Denver, CO                                 2002 – 2003

Computer Lab Assistant                                                                    Fall 2001

Student Assistant


EDUCATION

Bachelor of Arts, Metropolitan State College of Denver, Denver CO

Major: Behavioral Science      

Minor: Elementary Education

GPA: 3.58

 

AWARDS AND HONORS

·         Pacesetter Scholarship, 2001 – 2004

·         Governor Opportunity Scholarship, 2001 – 2004

·         Honor Roll, 2001 – 2004

·         Student Support Services, Certificate of Achievement and Recognition

 

VOLUNTEERING

Vivien Nails, 2007 – 2008

  • Managed accounts and supplies, and designed brochure and sanitized log chart.
  • Welcoming customers and provided nails care services.

Ashby Nails, 2004 - 2005

  • Greeting customers, performed nails care services, and cash handling.

Gust Elementary School, Second Grade, Spring 2003

·         Assisted students with writing and math, gave and checked spelling test weekly, and helped the teacher as needed.


REFERENCES

Available upon request

 

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Sakota  +  574468 Wed, 08 Oct 08 03:58 PM
To be honest I am not sure:
- do you want opinion on your Resume
- or English language used in your Resume?

In case you are asking about structure of your resume, I would suggest to write for what job position you are going to use it for. This is crucial thing, as most people get this wrong. You have to tailor/polish up your resume according to job position you are applying for. Never include something on your Resume that is not truth, as it may come back to your face and you could loose opportunity to get that job.
I would advise you to find/read an eBook about Resume writing, there are so many free guides on how to write a resume

In case you asked about English used in your Resume, I am sure you will find somebody to give you better advice than me on this subject Smile
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I am ready to be criticised. Just do it and I will appreciate it!
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