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Anonymous  #521485  Sun, 01 Jun 08 02:59 AM

 

I would be grateful if you read the sentence and check my articles (if something else is wrong-i would be grateful for all your comments)

India has a network of large and navigable rivers, free from the freezing effects of a severely cold climate. She has also a wealth of forests, abounding in strong timber which might be readily utilised for the construction of ships and boats.

  
Avangi  #521506  Sun, 01 Jun 08 04:21 AM

I see no problem with the articles.

"She also has a wealth of forests," is a bit more natural.

"effects of a severely cold climate" and "might be readily utilized" are good, but a trifle elaborate.

Best wishes,  - A.

 

  
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