Can anyone please review this recommendation letter for me and correct any errors for me? I am not sure if it's good to go! THANK YOU VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE!! ==================================================================================
Dear Mr. Galler:
I am writing to you in support of Miss Lee, Jenny and her desire to attend AAA University for the Complementary Health Sciences program.
Miss Lee majored in ethics in BBB university and later, she also took a course of Cosmetic Skin under Cosmetology department in CCC college. She graduated with excellent academic scores from both schools.
I know she had taken several practical courses, such as, Dermatology, Limp aroma therapy, Aroma therapy, Anatomy and physiology, and Cosmetics with great scores for her bachelor’s degree. She also took a skin care course in DDD Beauty Academy and took Make up & Coordination course as well as alternative medical courses, such as, Aroma therapy and foot reflexology in EEE academy before applying for your school. She not only studied those courses but also has practical experiences and even won several prizes for related contests.
Having observed her coursework, I know that she is always full of energy, practical experiences, and knowledge based on her passion for learning. She always sets good examples for others in group activities. Miss Lee still continues to impress me with her knowledge, skill and dedication to her work. She is one of the best students I have ever met and therefore, I highly recommend that she be given the opportunity to attend your university. I am sure you will find her to be a student whose talents will only shine further through your graduate program. It is my hope that you will accept her admission to your university. Feel free to contact me if you require further information.
Sincerely,