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Elevenq  #191767  Thu, 02 Feb 06 11:16 AM

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  With the help of technology, students nowadayscan learn more information and learn
it more quickly.use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


      It could be said that with help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and increase their efficiency .student today have a far greater advantage in being able to learn more and more fast than ever before.
      The reason why student could get more information today is due to the commonly available internet service . In the past, who would think that today you can get whatever information you want, just search it from the internet. People can use the internet not only to search, but also can help you to learn other thing quickly,such as use computer to design, control the whole company system. People can use internet to have a meeting , commucate about business though computer .what is one of  the best thing for people's life is almost  store use computer to settle accouts.
      Similarly,the internet is also the reason why student today not only have more information, but is able to learn more quickly. Student today can take class over the internet, getting their assignments, submit their homework,and they can use internet to seek a university or a part time job as well.  In the past, people only can kown what happen in the world though Newspaper, and it also not the event just occur.Oppositely, today peoply is able to know everything just happen in the world from the internet.
      Even though  people can get a lot of infomation through internet, it really change people's life .However, there are a large amount of garbage information  on the internet , like a lot of  game which waste lots of  student to student, also some bad  infromation teach people how to crime. And ,also some people use inernet to commit a cime. Compare to that , there are more advantage than defect.
    In conclusion, the internet  has truly revolution learning make a wealth of hereofore unavailable information freely to sudent in every area of the globe.At present , with the help technology people can do everything more convenient than before.

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