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#151911 Wed, 26 Oct 05 01:40 PM

Is it OK to say ''analyses and revision pf experiences''?

Thanks

p.s. The context: One of the components of negotiating system is organizational level which comprises: strategic process, team approach, technology and revision/review of experiences and sharing knowledge.

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Clive

#151919 Wed, 26 Oct 05 02:29 PM

Hi,

'Revision' suggests change, and you can't change an experience you have had, as it's in the past. I'd prefer to say 'review'.

Best wishes, Clive

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YoHf

#152263 Thu, 27 Oct 05 06:49 PM

He's right... I'd change it to 'review' too...

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Anonymous

#152365 Fri, 28 Oct 05 09:53 AM

Thank you very much

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