Please Help to rewrite this sentence

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Darksen  #255363  Sun, 13 Aug 06 10:16 AM

This is my first post and I came here to find answers to some grammar usage. I really want to improve the way I write.  For now I need help on this sentence. Can anyone revise this?

" This website is maintained by single person. As soon as the site progresses looking for a team members would be beneficial for the success of this website. "

word is reporting this as sentence fragment. thank you!

  
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nona the brit  #255372  Sun, 13 Aug 06 10:30 AM
This website is maintained by a single person. As soon as the site progresses, looking for team members would be beneficial for the success of this website.
  
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Clive  #255580  Sun, 13 Aug 06 11:02 PM

Hi,

" This website is maintained by single person. As soon as the site progresses looking for a team members would be beneficial for the success of this website. "

Welcome to the Forum. A couple more brief points.

I'd say " This website is maintained by a single person. As soon as it progresses, looking for team members would be beneficial for its success. "

Also, what does it mean to speak of a website 'progressing'? When you finish setting it up? When it gets a lot of hits? When you sell a lot of products?

Best wishes, Clive

  
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